the dazzling love

they met

fated by destiny  

became close enough

that breathing was impossible without each other

friendship changed into love

they hugged

kissed under the moon light

but could not be united

with the contract of ring 

as there was a barrier no power could banish it

no sword could destroy it

making the girl pull back

with the beautiful memories of love

love that were so full of warmth and comfort

the love which had support and care

believes were different making a big different 

turning back  with her first love ending

 but faith in her hearth  still  treasured by her deeply

love will come again but religion will die with her  

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50 Comments Add yours

  1. survivingbutterfly says:

    Wonderful☺

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Puneet says:

    I have read this and even commented on it. Maybe my comment has gone to your spam folder.
    I will again say, this reminded me deeply of someone and made me emotional.🙁
    The emotions were bang on. Beautiful write up. 🙂

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      1. Puneet says:

        Welcome. ☺️

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Puneet says:

    Hey you didn’t tell me about whether you’re studying and the city you are living in? 😐

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Well you also left in a rush ignoring the message

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      1. What when did you replied I give the last reply you did not and how am I a real scorpion explain please

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      2. Well your also a scorpion and you left you know how bad I felt I though you got bored of the conversation well why is it so hard for you when it’s so easy for me Indians lol

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      3. Well okay if you say so what’s so funny 😊

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      4. Wow you laugh when your mad surprise hahaha well it was funny so it’s ok to laugh

        Like

      5. And also your blaming me for so much comments 😞

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      6. Ok I am not getting angry was just teasing you

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      7. Well I just said it for making you not feel.so bad but.too much messages not my fault.

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      8. Why have you seen a proposal for.me.lol

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      9. Puneet says:

        Well let shoaib malik and Sania mirza to be only cross border couple. 😁
        I am just asking cause everyone else shared this info.
        If you aren’t OK, then no issues🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      10. Haha wow that was hard well if you wanted to know it’s ok a little effort you should make cause I am not everyone else right

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      11. Wow I did not remembered this

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      12. Well your a true scorpion.then

        Liked by 1 person

      13. Well I know that so what are you doing

        Liked by 1 person

      14. Puneet says:

        I am in last year of engineering.

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      15. Ahh I meat what are you doing now

        Liked by 1 person

      16. Well waiting for sleep to come haha

        Liked by 1 person

      17. It’s not early it’s 10 well just clearly ask my age if your curios

        Liked by 1 person

      18. Well it’s not wring to ask.age I.have said in my about page I.am.teenager.I guess that is enough and about doing in life I.do not like to talk.about it sorry

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      19. Puneet says:

        Oh ok… No issues. 😀

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      20. I meant wrong anyway thanks

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      21. Puneet says:

        Yeah understood. Nice talking to you. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      22. Puneet says:

        Good night. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      23. Puneet says:

        Have nominated you for blog awards. 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      24. haha the facts are like a reply to me and thanks

        Liked by 1 person

      25. hey they are the point 1 and 2

        Liked by 1 person

      26. hmm see i told you its a reply but men are men never agree well how is your mood now ?

        Liked by 1 person

      27. well that is hard agreement is the soul well man have usually this habit well nice all smiles hey your mood was not off because of me right

        Liked by 1 person

      28. well good to hear can i tell you something your really easy to tease i mean about the men thing i said

        Liked by 1 person

      29. your not old as you said your young blood

        Liked by 1 person

      30. that is too young you must be between from 20 to 25 and its not bad really

        Liked by 1 person

      31. yeah i guessed right me so intelligent haha

        Liked by 1 person

      32. well that is nice then you have become intelligent talking with me

        Liked by 1 person

      33. its no fun your giving me no reaction 😦

        Liked by 1 person

      34. no i am teasing you trying to make you little angry lol and your calmly agreeing with me ok i am intelligent yeah you should agree but the other that you become intelligent talking with me i said it to tease you

        Liked by 1 person

      35. well yeah its fun its funny as well you give good reactions

        Liked by 1 person

      36. Puneet says:

        Nice.. Well I have to go and attend a class so talk to you later sorry. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      37. its ok do not be sorry see you later

        Liked by 1 person

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