when the night comes ….

when the night comes and the cold touches my body

i miss your body warmth

the place next to in bed is missing you as well

this bed with the blanket is even more lonely

i miss your touch when the night comes 

it reminds me of you

the night is so tormenting

missing your affection i am alive not living

the night full of miseries

when the unfulfilled lust comes, i think of you

come and save me i can not sleep

your touch makes me to sleep

your kiss is like a drug making all illness go away

this room reminds me of you

the wall calls your name

everything is the same but your missing 

why you left me to the creeping night

come back to me before i go insane

a man or women both can be taken misses the lover that left them so now he  especially when the night comes  he is missing her cause in day people can get themselves busy and do not spend much time but night is the time the couples have the most special time  and also night makes you want to get intimate so the basic story was he is getting insane without her hope you get what i mean

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30 Comments Add yours

  1. Very romantic poem and clearly written. The tagged explanation some what mars it beauty. Let the unbridled imagination of audience feel what ever they delight.

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    1. thanks for the kind words i am glad you liked

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  2. Homemakersunited says:

    Lovely☺

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  3. Puneet says:

    You need not to explain. This poem beautifully conveys the meaning on its own.

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    1. thanks for the comment

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      1. Puneet says:

        Welcome.. Came back after so long. Well , I myself wasn’t here.

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      2. yeah i was not here for a long time

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      3. Puneet says:

        Welcome back then…

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      4. do not you want to have a chat or thinking of giving a cold shoulder ? 🙂

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      5. you do not need to anyway good bye

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  4. Beautiful Poem…Only few can seal intimacy within words which everyone can read without any dirt..

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    1. thanks i am honored for these words

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  5. Very emotive! Very nicely done. 🙂

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    1. thank you for your visit

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      1. No problem! Thanks for the response! 🙂

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      2. yeah always same to you

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  6. sasha says:

    Wow!such a romantic and i can feel the intimacy in each line😍.There is love,lust,romance and the wanted feel for the other one.Loved it💙!

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    1. hahah thanks your comment is really flattering :0

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      1. sasha says:

        😊it’s my pleasure ,but my comments are true.Those lines are really awesome!

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      2. i believe you thanks again 🙂

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      3. sasha says:

        You are so welcome😊

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  7. sasha says:

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    1. thank you so much for that

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      1. sasha says:

        You are so welcome😊

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